All About the Characters

Almost a year ago, I received a very nice personal rejection letter from a literary agent that I had met at Midwest Writers Workshop, and in it he described Gray Paree as “literary fiction,” which he does not really represent.  This really surprised me–I have always queried or pitched agents who represent historical fiction and mysteries, and have always considered my work to fall in these genres.  I expressed this surprise to a writer friend (who also happens to be represented by this particular agent), and she said that he was almost certainly correct.

Fast forward to May of this year.  This same friend served as a beta reader for The Jade Dragon.  Among her many awesome and insightful comments, she noted that the story reads to her as upmarket/literary historical in style, more than genre mystery.  She noted as example all of the complex character development, and the focus on the character arc more than the mystery itself.

I have long strived to write good character-driven fiction, and I love exploring the psychology of my characters, and especially how their family and/or religious backgrounds inform the way they interact with others (and themselves).  To me, that’s some of the most fun in writing fiction! For some reason, though, I just never made the connection between this as my personal style, and the label “Literary Fiction”–which carries with it both status and baggage for a writer.

Wikipedia notes that literary fiction generally focuses on:

  • “concern with social commentary, political criticism, or reflection on the human condition”–Check!
  • “a focus on introspective, in-depth character studies of interesting, complex and developed characters, whose inner stories drive the plot”–Check!
  • and “concern with the style and complexity of the writing…”–OK, not so much.

Still, two out of three should tell me something, right? It’s Pride Month, a time to be ourselves openly and honestly, so in that spirit I’m embracing it, and even celebrating it–I write upmarket/literary historical fiction! That’s me.  That’s who I am as a writer.

And that feels good.

Spring 2017 Update

It’s been a while since I posted an update, but there is a lot to report for this spring.

First, In a Safe Town has been well-received, earning five 5-star reviews on Amazon in its first three months. This has been very gratifying, and I am so happy that readers are enjoying the story.

I have been working on two manuscripts since November–The Jade Dragon, and the prequel to The Swiss Conspiracy that I wrote during NaNoWriMo this year–and both should be in the hands of Beta readers in the next few weeks.

On March 25, I attended the Indiana Writers Center’s annual Gathering of Writers. It was great to reconnect with some local writers, and to meet a couple of new writer friends. Bryan Leung delivered a great keynote address, and as usual there were insightful tips in the breakout sessions.

I’ve signed up for not one, but two writers’ conferences this summer. I’m excited for my sixth annual trip to Midwest Writers Workshop in Muncie in July, which is always a highlight of the year for me. I will also attend the Writers Digest Conference in New York in August, and I am very excited about this new opportunity, especially their much-lauded agent pitch slam. This will allow me to pitch Gray Paree to dozens of prospective literary agents in a very exciting atmosphere. Plus, I love going to New York.

The Jade Dragon should be available for purchase on Amazon by the end of May. My hope is to have the yet-to-be-titled prequel published in June or July. Watch for future posts!

Release This Weekend

I am very excited to announce that In a Safe Town (fka Murder at Sutton’s Pond) will be released in eBook format this weekend, and available on Amazon. The paperback edition will be released next week, and will also be available on Amazon. I have been working on this novel for many years, and I am so happy to finally make it available to readers.

I continue to work on The Jade Dragon, my next mystery, and plan to have it ready for release in early 2017.

NaNoWriMo is just around the corner, and I plan to use the month to write the noir-style mystery prequel that I began this summer featuring Martin Schuller, who is the protagonist of my (unpublished) WWII spy novel The Swiss Conspiracy. I have a basic plot in mind, along with some secondary characters; I’ve done a little research, and I’m excited to see where the frantic pace of NaNoWriMo takes this story. This will be my fifth consecutive NaNoWriMo, and it is always a thrilling experience.

It is a very busy, but very exciting time!

What I’m working on

It’s been a busy summer! I’m working on quite a few projects right now, in different stages.

First, Murder at Sutton’s Pond is going through its final revisions, and getting ready for cover design. I’ve been working on this story on-and-off for a really long time, so I’m very excited that it’s entering its final stages.

I continue to submit Gray Paree to literary agents. It’s gotten positive feedback, but no offers yet. I really believe in this story, so I continue to persevere.

I’ve begun revisions on The Jade Dragon, and I’m excited to get back to this story after almost a year.

I also recently started a new manuscript. It’s set in 1939 New York, and I see it as a noir-style detective mystery, with the same protagonist as The Swiss Conspiracy–so a prequel of sorts. I have been in edit mode on other stories for three months, and it felt really good to write something new again. I know I need to focus on the revisions to Jade Dragon right now, so the bulk of writing this new story may wait until NaNoWriMo in November.

I have another incomplete manuscript, set in 16th Century France during the Wars of Religion; I set this story aside in May at about 75k words, but I continue to workshop it with my monthly critique group. I have not drafted anything new with this story, but I make adjustments from the feedback of my critique partners. I really like the protagonist of this novel, and I’d like to see where his story ends up. Hopefully I’ll have time to get back to him before too long.

So, only five projects in the works at one stage or another. Busy summer!